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Re: Arabbix about section



On Sat, Nov 08, 2003 at 12:03:14AM -0800, Ossama Khayat wrote:
> 
> You're right. So, to make it a bit clear, maybe we
> could place a comma after the "people's hearts" to
> separate it. It will be:
> << but is also hoped that it will engrave into
> people's hearts, and minds Arabeyes' "can be done"
> and "results oriented" attitude and goals. >>
> 
> .. which is better than trimming the last two lines.
> 
> > Read it again [replacing Arabeyes' with 'his' and
> > the words between
> > quotes with items.. or something].. Although, it
> > could probably be
> > rewritten for brevity and clarity.
> 
> This change should be enough, I think... Nadim?
> 

No, don't place a comma there. That would be wrong ;)

Regards
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